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== The lead ==
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This article deserves a solid narrative type lead.  This is way too wikipedia.  Lets be creative. --[[User:D. Matt Innis|Matt Innis]] [[User talk:D. Matt Innis|(Talk)]] 11:50, 10 April 2007 (CDT)
This article deserves a solid narrative type lead.  This is way too wikipedia.  Lets be creative. I think we should play down the science in the beginning and concentrate on the art. --[[User:D. Matt Innis|Matt Innis]] [[User talk:D. Matt Innis|(Talk)]] 11:50, 10 April 2007 (CDT)

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Article Checklist for "Acupuncture"
Workgroup category or categories Healing Arts Workgroup [Categories OK]
Article status Developed article: complete or nearly so
Underlinked article? No
Basic cleanup done? Yes
Checklist last edited by Hillie Plantinga 14:54, 27 March 2007 (CDT)

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The lead

This article deserves a solid narrative type lead. This is way too wikipedia. Lets be creative. I think we should play down the science in the beginning and concentrate on the art. --Matt Innis (Talk) 11:50, 10 April 2007 (CDT)